I agree, the lighting is very ethereal. I also like the bits when you and your male friend are sitting at the table. When you disappear, he looks genuinely shocked, then forlorn. Sad and beautiful, great job.
This piece is very romantic and the lighting really makes it very surreal. I also love the focus on the hands and the way the gentleman looks when the woman is gone. Jon worded it perfectly, sad and beautiful.
Comments need to be kept constructive. If i feel they might be stepping over the line, I will delete them. If you still wish for your opinion to be heard and it should, please make it constructive and Professional.
Showing clips over and over isn't an easy way out at all, it's a narrative construct similar to a flashback that allows people to re-remember moments or reenforce specific moments. Theses things need to be discussed freely in critiques, and no one should take it personal. It's ment to make you all better at the electronic medium of video.
You did a great job in capturing the lighting. I like the dreamy feeling to it. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteI agree, the lighting is very ethereal. I also like the bits when you and your male friend are sitting at the table. When you disappear, he looks genuinely shocked, then forlorn. Sad and beautiful, great job.
ReplyDeletei like the disappearing act of the girl in the chair at the table, that's cool
ReplyDeleteThis piece is very romantic and the lighting really makes it very surreal. I also love the focus on the hands and the way the gentleman looks when the woman is gone. Jon worded it perfectly, sad and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteComments need to be kept constructive. If i feel they might be stepping over the line, I will delete them. If you still wish for your opinion to be heard and it should, please make it constructive and Professional.
ReplyDeleteShowing clips over and over isn't an easy way out at all, it's a narrative construct similar to a flashback that allows people to re-remember moments or reenforce specific moments. Theses things need to be discussed freely in critiques, and no one should take it personal. It's ment to make you all better at the electronic medium of video.